Meridian (Rough Draft) | ![]() ![]() ![]() |
[electronic version: https://soundcloud.com/harrymeas/meridian-1-7 ]
(7:30AM) Woke up.
(7:45AM) Took a shower.
(7:50AM) Thought about how the little droplets of water sounded like an aquatic applause while I sang with hair full of shampoo.
(1:00PM) Kept thinking about water.
(1:15PM) Searched Wikipedia for water and randomly went to Ocean and then Waves.
(1:45PM) Started to write lyrics using some of the vocabulary I learned.
(3:00PM) Rough draft recorded!
It's been a while since I sang anything and my medication unfortunately makes me cough and my throat really itchy. So if you can get past my whiny little voice and pretend it's Emie singing this song, then maybe it'll convince me to turn it into a future Undercover Apple hahha
I don't have lyrics for the end of the rough draft yet so I just hummmm.
[lyrics]
I dove down to the depths
Of your Atlantis
Past rogue waves and wavelenths
Fluxations in fluid dynamics
Refractions of a heart
Who's perspective was lost
To these ocean charts
Now I'm sinking down to you
Like an anchor that sifts through the blue
One hundred and eighty degrees
You're my meridian
With lines passing through me
Across the ocean
(7:30AM) Woke up.
(7:45AM) Took a shower.
(7:50AM) Thought about how the little droplets of water sounded like an aquatic applause while I sang with hair full of shampoo.
(1:00PM) Kept thinking about water.
(1:15PM) Searched Wikipedia for water and randomly went to Ocean and then Waves.
(1:45PM) Started to write lyrics using some of the vocabulary I learned.
(3:00PM) Rough draft recorded!

It's been a while since I sang anything and my medication unfortunately makes me cough and my throat really itchy. So if you can get past my whiny little voice and pretend it's Emie singing this song, then maybe it'll convince me to turn it into a future Undercover Apple hahha

[lyrics]
I dove down to the depths
Of your Atlantis
Past rogue waves and wavelenths
Fluxations in fluid dynamics
Refractions of a heart
Who's perspective was lost
To these ocean charts
Now I'm sinking down to you
Like an anchor that sifts through the blue
One hundred and eighty degrees
You're my meridian
With lines passing through me
Across the ocean
Dude this is beautiful and would be a BRILLIANT undercoverapple song
DO it!!!



Will be interesting if you could sample the droplets of water and mix it with real sampled applause, I think they may gel nice. Why not include it in the song somewhere together with ocean wave samples or similar.
It's a keeper, work on it some more and send to Emie
It's a keeper, work on it some more and send to Emie
Thanks for listening! If she likes the idea, I'll go on and create an Undercover Apple version with all that silly 8bit electronic nonsense 


Here's a look at the electronic version!
https://soundcloud.com/harrymeas/meridian-1-7
Here's a link to what I've been working on the past 2 days
I'm not too happy with the vocals. Learned some new compression techniques but I don't think it's working out for me. Maybe it's the distance I was from the mic too. I'll figure it out hopefully
The chorus vocals haven't been recorded yet, but expect Emie's beautiful voice to grace it
but once it's recorded, I'll have to see if I should edit the bass synths to be a bit more "friendly" to the ears. I think I'm the only one who loves all this square synth work lol.
Here's a link to what I've been working on the past 2 days


The chorus vocals haven't been recorded yet, but expect Emie's beautiful voice to grace it

Nice idea.
I do find the words a bit 'busy', a lot being said with few words, you picked up some good ones though.
A whole song of clever words can quickly become too clever ... and miss the story ....
So do you sing together at all, do you intend to, a duet of some kind could could wonderful
I do find the words a bit 'busy', a lot being said with few words, you picked up some good ones though.
A whole song of clever words can quickly become too clever ... and miss the story ....
So do you sing together at all, do you intend to, a duet of some kind could could wonderful
I totally agree with the busy-ness of the lyrics, especially in "Fluctuations in fluid dynamics." It's been bothering me the past 2 days now lol and I think I may need to change it around or just maybe to "Fluxes in fluid dynamics."
Thanks for listening kind sir!

UndercoverApple wrote…
I totally agree with the busy-ness of the lyrics, especially in "Fluctuations in fluid dynamics." It's been bothering me the past 2 days now lol and I think I may need to change it around or just maybe to "Fluxes in fluid dynamics."Thanks for listening kind sir!
Yes it's that bit I was getting at indeed ....
Dynamic Fluctuations ?
You could write more around Fluid and Fluidity as this is the theme of the song.
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