Long time no hear. Again. Anyhow, I got this theme being around for some time. Will turn into song eventually ....
Hope you like it
Niki

ok its work in progress .....

nice

get it to flow a bit more......try looping the rhythm guitar in the DAW to get rid of bumps ? then adding the drums so they fit 'au naturel'

listenin fish

Thanks. I see your point 
Drum track is just a click-sort-of-track (got a straightforward MIDI from one of the libraries and just snapped it on). Not going to end up like that  
No looping of rhythm guitar is going to happen, though

Foundation is there - I sense if you up the tempo it will flow better.
Sounds a bit flat.
Keep at it 

Not much needs to be said cos it's a work in progress and by the sounds of it you know what direction your taking with it. I will say, Nice guitar skills though...
Are there gonna be vocals?

Really diggin' the lead guitar!  Gives me the imagery of a desert and boots.

Thanks for giving it a listen and good hints/words

As for the vocals - if there's a vocal willing to join - more than happy to re-arrange it.
I find it very difficult to find a vocalist .... they become more rare than drummers.

Like an element for a future recording. Worth thinking of.