| When We Were Made Of Clay |    |
Crappy folk songs from the middle of nowhere. This is the title track off my first album. You can find the rest, including 3 other songs, an Old Crow Medicine Show cover, and a big ol medley at https://soundcloud.com/tamarack-2
Oh my gosh 
Welcome to bandamp first of all. 
So happy you find this excellent community. You'll love it here.
Secondly,
Your voice is fantastic. I love this style and you've captured the essence of lo-fi acoustic-ness oh so beautifully. I am gonna check out the rest on your soundcloud when I get some time.
I really love this and the lyrics are really good too. 2:48 vocal breakdown was incredible and un-expected. This is so so so good. Loved it. and welcome to the amp.
Welcome to bandamp first of all. So happy you find this excellent community. You'll love it here.Secondly,
Your voice is fantastic. I love this style and you've captured the essence of lo-fi acoustic-ness oh so beautifully. I am gonna check out the rest on your soundcloud when I get some time.
I really love this and the lyrics are really good too. 2:48 vocal breakdown was incredible and un-expected.
This is so so so good. Loved it. and welcome to the amp. TheKunadiun wrote…
Oh my gosh
Secondly,
Your voice is fantastic. I love this style and you've captured the essence of lo-fi acoustic-ness oh so beautifully. I am gonna check out the rest on your soundcloud when I get some time.
I really love this and the lyrics are really good too. 2:48 vocal breakdown was incredible and un-expected.
Dude you should put your stuff on bandcamp.com if you haven't already!!
With some work you could make this into a brilliant track. Your feel reminds me of one of the best songwriters here on bandAMP. Takaminerbb13 http://takaminerbb13.bandamp.com/ you will find a lot of his music in the hall of fame located on bandAMP
Have a listen to his work, I think it will open your mind and imagination.
Huge potential my friend.
Keep at it.
Have a listen to his work, I think it will open your mind and imagination.
Huge potential my friend.
Keep at it.
| re: When We Were Made Of Clay |
TamarackII wrote…
Crappy folk songs from the middle of nowhere. This is the title track off my first album. You can find the rest, including 3 other songs, an Old Crow Medicine Show cover, and a big ol medley at https://soundcloud.com/tamarack-2
part 1
welcome to the amp...
your song is lovely
so nice......do you really want critique??
ok for what its worth
the guitar sound is a bit flat throughout ... well played..in tune ...
but dynamically rubbery sound thats an e.q. thing
the vocals just lack a bit of edge/clarity cut specially in choir bit
i would love some real stereo split of the voices ...man that would be amazing
yep.... as i hear it the stereo picture is all in the middle ...
so use the panning to widen wake this whole track up
move the band around ... add a dimension
I listen on studio monitors sittin in the middle ... its all in the middle ... move it around a bit
the fish
Hey very nice vocal smooth edge gentle and sincere lovely song and really well executed ace.
Not worried about the guitar sound fine to me its all individual
Could be backed with uke or banjo mandolin accordian or london symph etc no worries as it's a very cool song .
Good luck with it all thumbs up here
gg
Not worried about the guitar sound fine to me its all individual
Could be backed with uke or banjo mandolin accordian or london symph etc no worries as it's a very cool song .
Good luck with it all thumbs up here
gg
Wow! This is quite the debut track I love your vocals and the progress just REALLY REALLY pulls you in! Post the other tracks too so they'll have their own thread for discussion. What are you using to record?
I love your vocals and the progress just REALLY REALLY pulls you in! Post the other tracks too so they'll have their own thread for discussion. What are you using to record?Oh, also, are you by chance a fan of Radical Face or Ben Cooper?
Denis wrote…
With some work you could make this into a brilliant track. Your feel reminds me of one of the best songwriters here on bandAMP. Takaminerbb13 http://takaminerbb13.bandamp.com/ you will find a lot of his music in the hall of fame located on bandAMP
Have a listen to his work, I think it will open your mind and imagination.
Huge potential my friend.
Keep at it.
I agree with your observation about Taka here!! I can totally see the resemblance now that you bring it out
First of all.......very very good composition. Im not a techie.....so I dont know how the hell you laid down all the tracks....mixed em.....refined em. But seems to me you know what you are doing.
Second....i agree with fishy.....guitar was a bit....um......muffled....like old strings played with no pick. Yes, i know it is a matter of preference.....i just would've liked a brighter ring to the strings. Vocals and lyrics very very good.
But.......i bow in your general gear-head direction....lol....and your obvious creativity!
Mb
Second....i agree with fishy.....guitar was a bit....um......muffled....like old strings played with no pick. Yes, i know it is a matter of preference.....i just would've liked a brighter ring to the strings. Vocals and lyrics very very good.
But.......i bow in your general gear-head direction....lol....and your obvious creativity!
Mb
Very beautiful, very creative.
I also thought the guitar was too 'flat' compared to the 'shinning' vocal, yet it fits and flows superbly.
Very nice lyrics, lovely story well put.
For it to sell though the guitar should be spiced up a bit, a bit more 'oomph' in production.
I want to suggest a 12 string or some other sharper sound but it could indeed be too much considering the over all melancholy, moody feel.
Top marks all the same.
Let us marvel at some more of your stuff ... upload please.
O! and a warm hearty welcome to bandamp ....
I also thought the guitar was too 'flat' compared to the 'shinning' vocal, yet it fits and flows superbly.
Very nice lyrics, lovely story well put.
For it to sell though the guitar should be spiced up a bit, a bit more 'oomph' in production.
I want to suggest a 12 string or some other sharper sound but it could indeed be too much considering the over all melancholy, moody feel.
Top marks all the same.
Let us marvel at some more of your stuff ... upload please.
O! and a warm hearty welcome to bandamp ....
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