I think it's mad.
But that insane vocal following melody is catchy .... scary ! lol
You have a tremble in some of the softer bits yet it sound a bit Pink Floydish when you go for it.
So you're working at it? It is vocal from one end to the other, not that it is a piece that needs more 'music', it just sounds like a poem to music and not lyrics to a song.
It's only three minutes yet there are enough verses to make it 5, some musical space maybe?
But that insane vocal following melody is catchy .... scary ! lol
You have a tremble in some of the softer bits yet it sound a bit Pink Floydish when you go for it.
So you're working at it? It is vocal from one end to the other, not that it is a piece that needs more 'music', it just sounds like a poem to music and not lyrics to a song.
It's only three minutes yet there are enough verses to make it 5, some musical space maybe?
kings wrote…
I think it's mad.
But that insane vocal following melody is catchy .... scary ! lol
You have a tremble in some of the softer bits yet it sound a bit Pink Floydish when you go for it.
So you're working at it? It is vocal from one end to the other, not that it is a piece that needs more 'music', it just sounds like a poem to music and not lyrics to a song.
It's only three minutes yet there are enough verses to make it 5, some musical space maybe?
Good suggestions! I'll probably do something like that with it.
And is it a good kind of mad or a bad kind of mad?
PlexTonic wrote…
kings wrote…
I think it's mad.
But that insane vocal following melody is catchy .... scary ! lol
You have a tremble in some of the softer bits yet it sound a bit Pink Floydish when you go for it.
So you're working at it? It is vocal from one end to the other, not that it is a piece that needs more 'music', it just sounds like a poem to music and not lyrics to a song.
It's only three minutes yet there are enough verses to make it 5, some musical space maybe?
Good suggestions! I'll probably do something like that with it.
And is it a good kind of mad or a bad kind of mad?
Now that was different!!
found myself listening to the instruments and not the vocals ....
love the 3/4 bridge
perhaps post the lyric so we can follow the verbal journey we are on.
and perhaps a definite hook might be useful
First time i think ive heard you on the amp ...
Great more please
Swordfish
Dude I just downloaded your album off of bandcamp I really liked this song too 
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