#1December 14th, 2012 · 04:48 PM
7 threads / 6 songs
20 posts
United States of America
2:00 PM (Thought)
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This song is not in a battle


From my album Today Is The First Day Of The Rest Of Your Life
(album can be downloaded for free at plextonic.bandcamp.com)

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#2December 14th, 2012 · 05:31 PM
340 threads / 59 songs
4,344 posts
United Kingdom
Very very good
Love it even .... wonderful style
Vocal is too low and could be more up front .... because that's it's style ...
Could the 'talked' break in the middle not have some 'Psychedelic' effect on it ? Sounds to me like it could fit the flow and the story    ..... GuitarRig has an amazing tripped out effect that works well with vocals too.

A Warm Woolly Welcome to bandamp too ..... it's cold here, what's it like over there ?
#3December 15th, 2012 · 11:29 AM
371 threads / 187 songs
3,377 posts
United Kingdom
I could see this being acted out at a theatre, it has that feel.

Drums need a bit of work, Bass guitar (I assume it's a guitar?) is boomy, I can help you deal with that. When you upload any new songs here, I'll help you get a better mix, or even the ones on your bandcamp album.

Welcome to the AMP
#4December 15th, 2012 · 11:11 PM
29 threads / 29 songs
94 posts
United States of America
Wow! Very catchy! Great harmonies! Sounds like a good mix as well
#5December 16th, 2012 · 12:21 AM
117 threads / 55 songs
1,541 posts
Chile
Your voice sounds really warm in a way, which gives the song a soothing mood.
I would only point out that the drums are a bit weak in the playing; a bit out of beat (pun intended). I think they should sound tighter. Try to record them using a metronome.

Cheers.

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