Another song about a girl that left... sort of from the point of view that the guy is sort of moving on but not totally.   Anyway...  let me know what you think!

Good stuff, nice and raw, real music.
You need to practice singing though ... do that for a few weeks, just to loosen up your voice a bit ... and then it's yours as far as I'm concerned.
In the shower, in the bath, thyme tea, holding notes for as long as you can, and keep on doing it.  

As kings said work on your vocal, you have a nice tone, just need to work on getting an even and steady volume.
The guitar & harp sounds a bit thin/shrill, how are you recording it?

I feel also you should end it about 3.30 mins.

The song is nice, decent melody and story line 

Bob Dylan can't even sing but earns money for every note he didn't hit....

Nice song. Like it anyway.