Not exactly a very serious or long song of mine but someone on youtube asked me to record a song intro for his upcoming youtube series and this is what I gave him.

I could do anything with this song. Perhaps I could like it on facebook.

=D
hahaha this is making me wonder what's the video about

did you get the clapping pattern from rumba flamenca?

LOL thanks triton!

thanks for listening as well JieXian! yeah I'll post a link when he gets the series up so you guys can see it 
Also no I didnt use a clapping sample pattern or anything thats just me clapping

Nice work - just needs tidiyng up a little, some timing issues.
The backing vocals are nice - they would be more effective if you can make them sound further away in the mix. You can do this with a combination of adding more reverb to the backing vocals than the lead vocal, plus take a little off the treble and upper mids.

Wonderful.

Why dont you scream or shout the backing track (you know how you can hate your 'other' self).
You could also whisper it ..... that might work with the secretive and prowling ninja idea.

Hahaha... makes me think of those "White Ninja" comics...
I find the background vocals very distracting... Like king says, maybe whisper the backing track would help as they seem to take away from the primary lyrics.

You know I kinda like this. Sure, theres the timing and mix issues which are minor and it would be better with the BG vocals whispered like Kings said but I like the lyrics. Unexpected and a little strange.  "set off atomic bombs" and "sleep underwater" - classic stuff.  You guys always bring me back to the days and feelings Syd Barret and the first Pink Floyd albums.  That early psycadelic pop feel linke "See Emily Play" or "Bike"
Happy little ditties like this and stuff like "the man" always keep me listening to what you come up with next.....SkunkApeDown61

I love this
You using minimalist ideas and repeats I LOVE IT
And phase shifting !!!!!

It's what I'm teaching right now!!!

THIS WORKS GREAT!!!!!
Minimalist FISH

I LOVE IT!!! BASICALLY BE AWESOME SLEEPING UNDER WATER!

You could end it with clapping and people just generally applauding and saying bravo, "good ninjaing"