This little tune developed while I was at work and when I got home was dying to try it out on a Clean Guitar and it came out quite nicely.I then added drums and a few other flavorful instruments.I also plan to add words in the future and lengthen the song.Tell me what you think please.

I like this one too, though not as much as your other one. Maybe I'll like it more when it's finished

beautiful little composition...i really like it alot

peace

Nice track

great sound, love the synthesyser

Worth making into a full fledged song.  Definitely.

pretty interesting idea i would definitly build on this nice progression

pretty interesting idea i would definitly build on this nice progression

pretty interesting idea i would definitly build on this nice progression

good...

nice idea. I'd like to hear a more developed version.

Hey!

Really nice song, really chilling

However there might be some points to get more flow in your song cause now it's a bit stuttering/rigid (damn I had to pay more attention with english at school :S)

- Add some reverb to the flute track
- Make the sustain and release time of the drum sounds longer so the drums sound more natural and less "cut off".
- Maybe adding a 2nd flute track
- Adding a bass track

the guitar sound is really nice!

I'm new. I heard a odd timing bump at about 1:10. Nice idea to build on.