a work in progress. instrumental for now, but still working on some lyrics. enjoy.

Hi Zakkane ....

and welcome to the amp ....
specially as you a music maker!!!!
This your first track loaded ........and its GREAT!!!

great moody chord sequence going on here ....

u got to be a guitarist full on!!!

only niggle is the psssst sound of crash cymbal...

and YEAH .... BRING ON THE VOCALS ... WAHOOO!!!!!

                     

loving the guitar !! ....... fish

Yes agree crash cymbal is very crashing
LOVELY GROOVE .... definitely Bring on the vocal ...
   tis silently SCREAMING for a real raw rock and roll roar 

Just get your crash shushed

Welcome Zak.
Nice rock groove, nice to jam to.
Do you have any other drums software/other kits in in the current software -  Addictive drums is great for this style - it's got BALLS...lol

I'd work on the panning a bit, create some separation, some tweaks on the EQ so that all intruments have there own place in the mix. You could record the rhythm guitar twice and pan them left and right, or use the 'haas effect', something I'm always going on about, but it's so effective - it's a must.

Look forward to hearing on how you progress with it.

Forgot to say
       Welcome on board,
              hope you like your stay,
    warm drinks will be served at 4:30 in the lounge, you are requested to ... wear a tie.

Rock on .....


 

I'll join u both 

Hello and welcome, Zakk.

This a a raw, classical r&b theme.

To improve or build up the track Iīd say you could eleminate some timing issues.
A main melody / vox would also structurise the composition.
Yes, I agree to the other comments about the cymbals. Change 'em.
Soloing is good but seems to be improvised. Can be worked out a bit more.
Fixed verse- and choruslines  would make the piece recognisable, individual.


Thatīs my impressions and ideas.
        rock on!!

U.L.I.