#1October 13th, 2012 · 03:03 AM
1 threads / 1 songs
3 posts
United States of America
Outlaw
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This song is not in a battle


a work in progress. instrumental for now, but still working on some lyrics. enjoy.

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#2October 13th, 2012 · 03:22 PM
176 threads / 26 songs
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United Kingdom
re: Outlaw
zakkane wrote…
a work in progress. instrumental for now, but still working on some lyrics. enjoy.

Hi Zakkane ....

and welcome to the amp ....
specially as you a music maker!!!!
This your first track loaded ........and its GREAT!!!

great moody chord sequence going on here ....

u got to be a guitarist full on!!!

only niggle is the psssst sound of crash cymbal...

and YEAH .... BRING ON THE VOCALS ... WAHOOO!!!!!

                     

loving the guitar !! ....... fish
#3October 14th, 2012 · 07:21 AM
341 threads / 59 songs
4,361 posts
Cymru (Wales)
Yes agree crash cymbal is very crashing
LOVELY GROOVE .... definitely Bring on the vocal ...
   tis silently SCREAMING for a real raw rock and roll roar 

Just get your crash shushed
#4October 14th, 2012 · 07:48 AM
371 threads / 187 songs
3,394 posts
United Kingdom
Welcome Zak.
Nice rock groove, nice to jam to.
Do you have any other drums software/other kits in in the current software -  Addictive drums is great for this style - it's got BALLS...lol

I'd work on the panning a bit, create some separation, some tweaks on the EQ so that all intruments have there own place in the mix. You could record the rhythm guitar twice and pan them left and right, or use the 'haas effect', something I'm always going on about, but it's so effective - it's a must.

Look forward to hearing on how you progress with it.
#5October 14th, 2012 · 09:14 AM
341 threads / 59 songs
4,361 posts
Cymru (Wales)
Forgot to say
       Welcome on board,
              hope you like your stay,
    warm drinks will be served at 4:30 in the lounge, you are requested to ... wear a tie.

Rock on .....


 
#6October 15th, 2012 · 04:10 PM
176 threads / 26 songs
2,342 posts
United Kingdom
kings wrote…
Forgot to say
       Welcome on board,
              hope you like your stay,
    warm drinks will be served at 4:30 in the lounge, you are requested to ... ware a tie.

Rock on .....


 :razz:

I'll join u both 
#7October 17th, 2012 · 12:08 PM
117 threads / 27 songs
1,057 posts
Germany
Hello and welcome, Zakk.

This a a raw, classical r&b theme.

To improve or build up the track Iīd say you could eleminate some timing issues.
A main melody / vox would also structurise the composition.
Yes, I agree to the other comments about the cymbals. Change 'em.
Soloing is good but seems to be improvised. Can be worked out a bit more.
Fixed verse- and choruslines  would make the piece recognisable, individual.


Thatīs my impressions and ideas.
        rock on!!

U.L.I.
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