first thing I recorded after a 3 or 4 yr span...I went home to visit a friend/ neighborhood where I grew up and wrote it when I got back home..Figure I should start at the (new) beginning..Still needs a solo and bass..It is what it is..:P

Yea some things you do can touch the soul so much, everything just clicks into place
The guitar has a reverb effect that removes it instead of 'placing' it and the vocal is way too muddy, needs to be brought right up and metalized.

These rap rock songs dont really do it for me but this would have worked for me if you would have sung the chorus more,  or a female vocal part would also do the same thing

Keep on doing it ... now that you can

Hey BC nice to see you back - Not bad considering you have been away from it for so long.
Get the drums more punchy and add some bass.