New Song called Let it go.  tell me what you think!

vox line and gtr line just mimick each other as is..I think I hear a lead track and a rhythm, I believe if you lose the rhythm track it will give it separation and make a nice blend...then bring the rhythm back, drop the lead and do a solo...this will also give it another element/sound to keep the listener involved. maybe some harmonies here and there wouldn't hurt either..keep on writing and recording.. cheers

Interesting, I can hear what this is trying to be but as BC states above the vocal follows the guitar and causes a negative listening effect.
The story to the song in the lyrics and the emotion are there but it could be formed differently with a more musical flowing