This is another song without vocals that I came up with few months ago.
I'm really interested in your opinion, so please comment and review.
I will be working on it more, but for now here it is.
Thanks
Music and lyrics were written by G.Vedris

Run Your Love Over Me

Like every story starts with a hero
Who's destiny is to save a princess
From some big evil i take you to heaven
But didn't know you will bring living hell

Still there's a hope living somewhere inside me
That this ain't real and that soon I'll wake up
Bad dream reminds me I'm still in your sighting
You are the reason why my mind is blown

chorus: Sometimes i wonder is it worth waiting
        why am i staying? I could go somewhere
        Instead of joy i fell so low
        and let you run your love over me

How to determine if there's a slight chance
that maybe one day you'll come around
There was a time once when I was your savior
But times keep on changing, so does the love

Why we keep playing with feelings and psyche
Isn't the bloodsucking more than enough? 
When we get married our feelings get buried
Now I'm "the bitch" and you are "the dad"

chorus: Sometimes i wonder is it worth waiting
             why am i staying? I could go somewhere
             Instead of joy i fell so low
             and let you run your love over me

As every story ends with a hero
kissing his darling, saying goodbye
I've seen the devil in the disguise
now i can tell babe that "you are the one"

chorus: Sometimes i wonder is it worth waiting
             why am i staying? I could go somewhere
             Instead of joy i fell so low
             and let you run your love over me

Ho, that rocks. Hi energy, full speed shred. 
Everything´s spot on here, I guess. Very good mix.
Can´t see any point to criticise. except the fact, that you´ve posted the lyrics but nobody´s singing here.    Confused. But perhaps you´re gonna add a vox later on.


U.L.I.

thank you very much yes, i've just posted lyrics to show the main idea. and i'm still looking for someone to sing these songs, so he could get the feeling about everything.

Aah, yes. I see.
Not easy to find a singer for hardrock stuff.
Which part of this work did Tihomir Babic here ?  Was it you who played all instruments or is it a band playing ?

i've played and recorded everything (guitars, bass) drums were made with fruityloops using addictive drums sounds. tihomir babic came up with that lead melody and i made a song out of it.

Hey Goran,
spot on guitar work, I am jealous there
Like the riffs and the drum rhythm much!
Its recorded/mixed very well as stated, only thing I can think of (except for vocals), is the hihat, it is very static and gets boring, maybe a soft crashride and some variety in pattern could enhance this ?
Oh, how I wish I could sing hardrock!

thank you so much yeah, hihat sounds a bit annoying, i agree. i've tried to put some other sounds but didn't like it either. i'll try something with ride cymbal, and different drum patterns..

Great guitar sound - The bass also goes nice with it.
It's got great up beat - if you worked on the dynamics, structure and lead guitar you could quite easily make it an instrumental

If I'm being picky you could work on the drums more by adding accents.

i'll probably come up with some guitar stuff and make an instrumental thank you all for giving it a listen

This makes me run 100m in 5.4 sec

But the hihat thwarts me otherwise I am running much faster

I know it's not perfect. But these recordings were recorded so my band members could learn the songs.  
I've been working on this song, and it won't be instrumental.