I have made this swing.

As requested, the lyrics.

The lock was not picked
No one kicked in the door
There was no broken glass
On the floor.

Someone broke into my heart
I woke up and they were there.
Some how I lost the key to my love.

Well. I called the cops.
Tried to press charges
for trespassing.
He said, "Boy. We've all been there before.

"Someone broke into your heart.
They walked in without knocking.
Somehow they found the key to your love."

Then he said,
"Today, the skies are grey and cloudy
(but) there are so many people
who are looking for something
like you've found."

I fixed the lock.
Got that key in a safer spot
I couldn't share it if I felt that I should.

I filed a claim,
But the new stuff won't be the same.
I'm thinking about changing
My neighborhood.

Someone broke into my heart.
They took everything worth keeping.
All they left me was bitter
Towards love.
updated: 9-16-2012

dum di dum 
Yeah , that swings. Easy listening at it´s best. Fits my mood this day.
Simple, but perfect arrangement.

Would be great if you´d post also the lyrics above.

U.L.I.

u could make this unusual and fantastic
using pan

so far its just great

it seem i n the middle too much

spread it out

??

fish

Liked ... the 50s radio feel to it suits your lyrics, good performance.
Chady-dy-cha 

Thanks for the input and comments. I'll have to try out that pan. I think I was going too much for the old style swing sound (before stereo).

And as requested I have added the lyrics.

 

Good lyrics. Like them alot. The track as a whole sounds a bit thin... I know it's the effect that you're going for, but I personally think this song is good enough to put to a much wider audience and feel that you'd have more success with it if you conform just a bit more to the current trends and give it a fuller, poppier sound (more bass and more umph in the rythm guitar) but still keeping the retro essence (a bit like how the La's were doing 1960's music in the 90's).

Wow. That's a great thought.
Hmm. Perhaps inspiration is striking me.

Ow!