#1August 10th, 2012 · 05:30 AM
39 threads / 38 songs
131 posts
Netherlands
June, One Of These Days
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This song is not in a battle


Hey guys,

I recorded an eighties-inspired synthpop track.
This is the first mix. I'm not so good at mixing,
so is there anyone who would like to try?

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#2August 10th, 2012 · 03:40 PM
117 threads / 27 songs
1,057 posts
Germany
Hey, thatīs an uplifting summer popsong. Love the synth voices you used, pads as well as lead .
I also like the mix. But I think the drums can be improved by
1. using dynamics and
2. adding some more drum loops for more variation.
Vox and harmonies are sung nicely, but need also a bit overwork with dynamics and reverb.

U.L.I.
#3August 10th, 2012 · 04:51 PM
371 threads / 187 songs
3,394 posts
United Kingdom
The mix is pretty good - ULI has made some good suggestions.
The harmony vox are nicely panned. big sound.
The only thing other thing is add a desser on the vox. Also perhaps a string synth in the verse at low volume with quite a bit if reverb to add depth to the mix.

Nice song 
#4August 10th, 2012 · 05:11 PM
341 threads / 59 songs
4,361 posts
Cymru (Wales)
Very 80s, a really poppy sound. Nice and catchy.
I think bringing up 'one of these days we will die' makes 'the story' a bit dismal ... seeing as it's such an up beat song.
Putting it another way, like ... "because one of these day these days will be gone" ... might .... keep the mood.
As usual a good strong Razor production 
Cheers
#5August 14th, 2012 · 06:43 AM
7 threads / 7 songs
23 posts
Germany
Like kings said - this is a perfect 80s tune! The voice is a bit too much in the front and too dry.
#6August 14th, 2012 · 04:52 PM
29 threads / 23 songs
197 posts
United States of America
I really like the way this track is mixed already

I love 80s synth pop!  I really like that that "whoo" synth with the pitch bends!  Very catchy work!  I'd jam this in the car
#7August 18th, 2012 · 06:06 PM
176 threads / 26 songs
2,342 posts
United Kingdom
GREAT
love it .............. so laid back its horizontal

80s who cares fish
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