Before I release a new song, I go back and listen to the songs I have released prior to this. I listen for the way that I go, and I hope that you can agree with me that I am growing.

This piece is one that I had to step out of my comfort zone for. I normally love driving bass, rough synths, and 150 BMP. This track is, in my mind, just another electric track. I did want something I can just lay back to, but I don't like this genre of music because you almost never feel a melody.

But nevertheless, I still like the song because of the fact that I was willing to step out and try it. I think I did an alright job at producing a genre I know nothing about and I look forward to listening to your guys' critiques.

It ain't my genre either, still I think you did a great job, in a way I like it anyway..
a breakdown would have been nice i guess.., building it up again to crescendo...
production is loud and clear!

The arpeggios a nice, if you lower them in the mix you would be able to add a melody line.  I sense that a melody with long notes would fit nice. Funny the tempo seems very fast to me more than 150bpm (could be I'm feeling it's double time?), what is the tempo out of interest?

BIG SOUND

The tempo was set to 137. I mostly had kicks on the half notes. I did try to 'speed it up' by adding the arps which I believe were set to 16th notes.

I can hear the creative aspects but feel that there is some over compression issues and for sure some eq and stereo field placement issues..As far as I can tell technique is there given the fact that you can automatize the Bpm towards the end(Call it a sign of tech knowledge)Again other than that you are lacking a hook and built for the genre IMO!

Cool, it does revolve around the same arp loop ... but amazing sound it is never the less.
I liked how the beat came in and I liked how it broke down slightly at 2:00 .... I'd say you need to look for the story in the instruments and sounds.

Clear, loud and detailed produced. Sounds pro.
But it´s rather repetetive coz you´re using just 3 chords which were  just varied , but not changed.
That makes me loosing attention and interest after a while.
I´d say the track needs changes, variations, breaks, surprises..........something  to keep it attractive to listen to.

U.L.I.

The intro arp has a very glass feeling as if I'm looking into a melancholy person's thoughts.  Overall, I thought the track was a bit repetitive though it definitely kept me listening.  I enjoyed the drop you had at 1:13 and felt that'd be a great place to change the song's direction a bit   Cheers and keep it up!