This song is pretty "rocky" but I think it still fits in with our stuff. The drums on it our pretty basic which we regret... haha. It is still a demo though so whatever...

If you like this trash you can listen to more of our songs at http://soundcloud.com/likenoise

Tell me what ya think... Thanks!

It's a good song again. I bet you sound great live but in my opinion, you need to get your recordings nailed if you wanna take it further. You're a bit plagued by timing issues. Sort these out and you'll be great. How old are you guys? Is it a high school band?

Yeah nice again. You guys have a great sound and feel. It's been said by many, all you need to do is tighten up, and personally get some body in the bass guitar, it will sound so much better, just you see.

Hope you guys get the chance to work at it together.

lots of energy, i like that
vox are drowning, never good for a popsong..

You guys have some good basic ideas, but you need to work more accurately, patiently, precisely on your songs.
Try to develop a certain "system", "procedure". YOUR system.
You could try to record stepwise. Divide a song into sections (i.E. 16 bars). Then play the git-part (on metronome) until it´s clear and without flaws. (If needed 30 / 40 times)
When you´ve done the git-track start recording the bass track etc, etc.
When all recordings are finished take time (preferable a few days) for the mix and mastering.
Use different devices for monitoring the mixing process.

Recording music is a long, hard process which shouldn´t be done in one day. .....usually.

U.L.I.

I like the song but IanS said there were timing issues. The intro did seem a little off timing, but it seemed to go away for me as I got into the feel of the song. And I certainly loved the ending.

The vox does need a little bit of work, maybe just equalized so I can hear them a bit better.

Could you also post the lyrics?

I like the vocal!  I love these kinds of songs though it is a bit rough around the edge just like you stated.  What software are you using to record and what is your setup like?

Again all creative aspects are there except for the most important thing(Time)...Think of this...Would you want you heart be to be irregular?...So if music expression is based on heart and rhythm,then why not play it how is meant to sound?...go the extra mile and do be shy ,you'll see what I'm talking about when you get there...don't compromise your timing...it separates garage from pros!