#1July 13th, 2012 · 09:20 AM
77 threads / 31 songs
353 posts
Norway
Gave Up So Easily
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This song is not in a battle


I don't know
where to go
or where I am
I don't know...

I should know
why I'm here
I don't know the reasons why

You gave up so easily
and I don't know why
You gave up so easily
and you didn't even try
And all of these things
that made me say goodbye...

I don't know
why I left,
why I cried
I did cry

I should know
why I left
I don't know the reasons why

You gave up so easily
and I don't know why
You gave up so easily
and you didn't even try
And all of these things
that made me say goodbye

You gave up so easily
and I don't know why
You gave up so easily
and you didn't even try
And all of these things
that made me say goodbye...

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#2July 13th, 2012 · 04:47 PM
5 threads / 4 songs
14 posts
United States of America
You have a very cool voice. I really enjoy the melodies and the guitar is super cool! And that pan in the mix after the line "that made me say goodbye"? that was just straight genius!

Very nice work
Keep it up
#3July 14th, 2012 · 06:42 AM
2 threads / 1 songs
85 posts
United Kingdom
Hey. It's good to see you back on here. Don't know if you wanna be reminded but we did a collab on here when my alias was 'sirborris' a number of years ago ... called "midnight garden"    lol.  Think we've both come along way since then.

This is a pretty sad song... it's good tho. Is this the final edit? I can imagine it with a few more instruments or even just diff guitar tracks in the mix to give it a bit more depth. some light drums, just some brushes on the hi hats and not much else.

Good work tho
#4July 17th, 2012 · 03:57 AM
117 threads / 27 songs
1,057 posts
Germany
Sad but beautiful. Strong and expressive.
As Ian suggested you could work it out a bit in order to make it a great ballad. Perhaps adding some strings later in the song . ...........There are sooooo many ways to arrange a song...........

U.L.I.
#5July 18th, 2012 · 05:23 PM
176 threads / 26 songs
2,342 posts
United Kingdom
re: Gave Up So Easily
Kine wrote…
I don't know
where to go
or where I am
I don't know...

I should know
why I'm here
I don't know the reasons why

You gave up so easily
and I don't know why
You gave up so easily
and you didn't even try
And all of these things
that made me say goodbye...

I don't know
why I left,
why I cried
I did cry

I should know
why I left
I don't know the reasons why

You gave up so easily
and I don't know why
You gave up so easily
and you didn't even try
And all of these things
that made me say goodbye

You gave up so easily
and I don't know why
You gave up so easily
and you didn't even try
And all of these things
that made me say goodbye...

Welcome home to bandamp....
I remember you from years past!!!
this song is very strong .........confidently played ....recorded to one microphone
.... sounds very personal???..great voice...in tune:) ........love it.

best wishes

swordfish
#6July 19th, 2012 · 12:27 PM
13 threads / 13 songs
41 posts
United States of America
I love the lyrics to this song. I love the fact that as it starts out, I don't really know whats going on, and when the chorus comes in, I understand everything. It brings a new meaning to the song at that point, now that I know what it is centered on, and I love that.

I also love the power you put behind the last chorus.

Great Job!
#7July 20th, 2012 · 10:29 PM
128 threads / 44 songs
2,814 posts
Puerto Rico
I say for organic...do away with vocal effects and go acoustic for the real feel...You are cheating yourself out of what can be....oh and try this song much slower and you might be surprised...all Ill say is try it...IT MIGHT WORK BETTER!
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