#1July 12th, 2012 · 07:55 AM
77 threads / 31 songs
353 posts
Norway
Don't You Ever Forget
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This song is not in a battle


I wrote this for my son.

He lies down quietly
smiling at the things he sees
There's not a thing that will push him off the ground
And some beautiful colors caught his eye
He ran too fast and stumbled, now he cries
But who is that you see?
Mommy...

Mommy will make you feel much better
Mommy will take your pain away
Mommy will hold your hand forever
Don't you ever forget
Don't you ever forget
Don't you ever forget...

Mommy will make you feel much better
Mommy will take your pain away
Mommy will hold your hand forever
Don't you ever forget
Don't you ever forget
Don't you ever forget
Don't you ever forget
Don't you ever forget

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#2July 12th, 2012 · 02:17 PM
128 threads / 44 songs
2,814 posts
Puerto Rico
Great composition on the axes..Loving the vocals harms...Totally see tons of talent within you!
#3July 13th, 2012 · 02:31 AM
117 threads / 27 songs
1,057 posts
Germany
This is pretty lovely. Gits sound nice.
Yes, vox harms were sung great.  Perhaps you might clear up the solo vox in the beginning a bit by using another EQ-setting and adding hi-mids.

U.L.I.
#4July 13th, 2012 · 09:15 AM
77 threads / 31 songs
353 posts
Norway
Thanks for the feedback 
#5July 13th, 2012 · 03:20 PM
371 threads / 187 songs
3,384 posts
United Kingdom
Hey Kine nice to to see posting again.
Love the composition.
It sounds like you either recorded the vox and acoustic in a echoy room, or you have used a plate style reverb.
If it's the reverb, I'd try something like a small hall effect, and very little, hence to me it should have a more intimate sound.
#6July 14th, 2012 · 04:32 PM
2 threads / 1 songs
85 posts
United Kingdom
reminds me of pink floyds mother, probably just because there aren't many songs written about mums really (not that I can think of anyway). beautiful sentiment to the lyrics. really nice song...

personally, i'm loving the guitar reverb, esp on the higher picked notes. The fingerpicked pattern sounds a wee bit close and bassey. The vox in the chorus are really good... rich and warm...

Good to see you posting songs again
#7July 25th, 2012 · 07:39 PM
29 threads / 23 songs
197 posts
United States of America
Wow I'm honestly touched by this song.  It's simply beautiful!
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