I wrote this for my girlfriend on Valentines day. I think it came out a bit Elvis Costello-ish... Might just be 'cause I can't quite hit the high notes.
Going for a more 60's feel here.

Man this is awesome. Production wise and everything. I have no idea how to actually get this kind of production quality sound. Excellently awesome job. I really like the sound of your voice too. Very very good can't believe you did this just in your spare room.

Lucky girlfriend : Not many women around who get such great, upbeat song presented at Valentine (or each other day).   

Many V-days to come with more music like this. 

U.L.I.

Excellent ... very very very good song , lovely production, humorous lyrics ... bet she loved it ... married you the very next day.

Well done guys.
One can hear the spare room reverb on the vox track. Doesnt fit anyway.. But I guess you're going to record in a studio? Otherwise you can add some extra reverb on the vocals.
I expected a development to a crashing ending. Sometimes I don't like those fade outs.

All in all a happy song. It's joy to my ears. All thumbs up!

wow this is fantastic......
all i would ask is bring the vocals more to the front if ucan ....
put your lyrics up on the post
pan your track a bit more .... take the chuck guitar to one side
i put my phones on.....
yep it all sounds very centred
bak vocs centre
play with the pan
its all comin at me from the middle
guitar solo in the middle
fantasic song .... please play with panning .... it was a cool trick used by producers in the late 50s ..early 60s
love it!!!!

its got everything .....for a pop song

except a good hook in the song ....

i do not see strong a really strong  hook

fish .... off the hook

fish

enjoyed it big time! Excellent one ! So glad i clicked play 

Production might be touched, if you are going to get it on the radio - which is perfectly possible - esp. in the summer now (might need to change the lyrics though )   But it's fine even as it is now.

Me like it a lot lot !!!!   :