Little song me and our lead guitarist wrote yesterday afternoon . I know the harmonies are off but it's the first time he's sung in any of our songs so he just needs to practice! We definitely need some harmonies (both live and in recordings) so this is a step in the right direction!

Only a rough recording with guitars and vocals, we'll play it with the rest of the band at our next band practice (so don't worry about recording quality or the mix or anything like that). Just want to post it on here before we do anything else with it!

Very catchy melody solid arrangement and lyric deadly pop a great contender one worth working on .
More than just a step in the right direction really enjoy.
Thanks for posting
 

Sounds great considering it's a rough cut - would like to hear it with the band, perhaps video it and put it up on YouTube 

My girlfriend likes the intro. She thinks it's cute. I like it too. Put a band behind it and it would rock. It's got great hooks. Lyrics are kid friendly. You're right about the harmonies, but you'll get there.I can hear it easily being a 'Good Charlotte' type song, (like em or hate em, they sold a lot of music!)