I'm new to this genre. Still work in progress.

Made it in cubase.

I found myself quasi-freestyling to this..lol.. I quess I like it!

I hope you will work this out into a complete song, since I think the beat is nice and deserves it.

The Sub Bass is too loud, it should be subtle - Do you have a Sub Speaker to monitor it.
The foundation is there, so should be easy for you to add layers.

Can't critic the music, I'm no expert with this genre

Sounds like some heavy sidechaining is going on with the kick..Id say a bit much...but yeah good foundation over all!

A! The other way round! Bass drum loooooww  ... Ooo's / Doo's hiiiigher ...
I can hear some cool shit coming out in this piece ... the strings have it .... I really hear them breaking out into something similar to this http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2GlJSU6KecY , the strings that is  

Good basic idea for a short movie. But I'd like to hear chord changing. somewhen. After a while it needs some variety.
Yip, bassdrum is droning. Less is more.

U.L.I.

kings clothes here

so where is the song
nice beat
bandamp is a songwriters site??

ok work in progress
bring on the song

bring stuff to the amp more than.........please

oh yeah ............and review me back ........its how the site works

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