Here's a near final mix of one of the track of my album
any comments are very welcome as an outside view is always useful at this point

Oh this is just too sweet complete with whistle solo & guitar and such a sunny swing. Captures an innocents with flair confidence and style.
Always a fan here

Just love it
 

I love the Music, great fun had by all is what it sounds like.
If I were to critic, I would ask you to try singing it in a higher key

Keep it up

Great song. Very happy. The instrumentation is great. The melodic writting is realy impressive.

I do think the lyrics sit a bit unclear in the mix. I'm not the most knowledgable about mixing, but I think could adjust the relative volume a bit.

Superb song, really happy, the music is pro.
Your vocal is lovely but as mentioned above it's too close in the mix, something loud about it compared to the music..... could be some french settings of course    ; )
The first bit sounds like you could sing it higher but you get into it and it becomes very sexy
Very nice work as usual Vince

had to switch off the speakers and listen to this on the headphones to get the picture in my head.

your voice falls in the mid range and just drops into the mix a bit....

specially against the piano....

i could be talking bollox ....... but perhaps look at lifting the vox out a bit more .... i know im just hearing an mp3 ...and im convinced you have looked at this too ....

maybe double the vocal track .....split slightly with a different eq on each side??

interested fish ............. oh yeah and I LOVE THE SONG