Here's a little song we just recorded. It's been years since I posted here. Any comments or critique is certainly welcome.
Thanks

Catchy little happy go lucky number
Perhaps add some more vox layers on the chorus, cut to about 2.5mins.
Bass & Drums would be nice 
Lead guitar a bit heavy handed, a little more practice should do the trick.
Reminiscent of the Shadows kinda era.

Nice one 

This seems to be a raw basic track. Itīs built up and composed pretty good.
As Denis said: itīs  a happy number.
But thereīs a lot work to do on the arrangement, timing and soloing.  Then it will become capable for radioplays .

U.L.I.

Feels like the oldies in the beginning, like how it picks up. You've got a voice that sounds like Eddie Vetter sometimes lol

WELCOME BACK!!!!

open arms for a songwriter!!!!!

song laid bare..........great!

you have a unique sound too !!!! its cool

love it

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Wow, Eddie Vedder.
Thanks for the great compliment!
Cheers