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When two stars that orbit each other are at their closest point.

Thanks Denis and U.L.I for your comments on a previous upload. I think I'm about ready to lay this idea to rest.

The instruments are so crystal clear that it hurts sometimes in my ears.
I would send the sharp melody sound through some filters and play around with frequencies. Same to the drums, it would bring more life to the track.

FL has a Vintage Compressor - see how that sounds, get it so that the sound is just starting to break up.

sounds like a drug name .... haha

trak flips well

does what it says on the can ............no surprises just a great groove....

i refer to guide to rating songs link .....

that i seem to have written many moons ago!!!!

so 50+ %

nice one

fish of old wisdom

Itīs a calming, relaxing feeling . Nice composition. Regretably a bit short. You should work it out. There are good ideas.
About the FL sounds...........itīs a matter of taste, I guess. Some are likable to me, some arenīt.

U.L.I.

First of all I think this track has one of the most important things; a clear feeling to it. Good work.

When it comes to production I feel the sounds could be a bit more mellow so the melody never claims so much attention that I loose the emotional approach to the track.

And on a personal note I think some of the figures would win with repetition. e.g. in a version where the chords change but the figures remain the same and hence let us experience the same figures in a new light.

Keep up the good work!

I so badly want to go back and remix the song, add a bit more to it an so on.. But I lost the save file..
 

man ive lost stuff like that so much too

damn .. Fish

another very good instramental