New song for our band,..
It is all about the form.
So: A-intro A-sing A-solo B-(Irish dub) A-sing A-solo End (in D maj.)
I turn it on band-amp because my band-members don"t give any reply
Hopefully you do  thanks  Volt.

The sound is very muddy -  was this recorded at a band practice?
Can you re-record it please, or try to re-mix, though I doubt you will will improve on the mix if the raw recording is this, it's impossible to make a poor recording sound good.

Hope you are not offended, but I will review your song fully when you have re-recorded it.

He Dennis,..
No i think you misunderstood,..
This is a raw version which i recorded myself,..( fruity loops drums/ guitar / bas guitar).
To introduce to my band-members
So the question should be: has this song got enough potential to play with the band you know

Sorry for the misunderstanding.
I would still re-record it before you play it to your band, or better still play it live to them with just rhythm guitar, then show them the other parts, if they like it work on it

Thanx Denis,..
In the mean wile they have react,..positive
Thanx for your re.  i will keep it in mind.
Gr. Volt.

I think thisone will work in a band context. Needs a good arrangement and recording. Then it will push a lot and kick ass .

U.L.I.

Thank you ULI,...
I will let you ( all) hear,..
When recorded,..
This month we will record with the band,..
Also this one .
Gr. Volt.

Looking forward to band version & "Kik Ass"