This is a little acoustic piece that I wrote in my boredom today. It would be alot more distorted and very metal, but I was too lazy to drag my amp closer to my computer and I don't have a drum set at the moment. Either way, its just a simple quick acoustic piece with multiple guitars.

It´s an interesting basic theme. Could be nice if it would be worked out. But it sounds still a bit muffled. Adding some treble might make it sound more airy and clear.
I´m courious about this as a completly arranged and performed piece with drums, bass and keys..

U.L.I.

Yeah I can hear the concept....I can see this being a metal idea...You should try and get it nailed down with a sort of drum machine or software and maybe add bass and distortion to the guitars..Good one!