Hi,  I was very happy to have critisisms about the unconsistent tempo of the 1st version so here's my 2nd attempt

Also added some simple bass movements and 2 minor phrase changes

Always happy to have suggestions to improve

Normally don't listen to guitar by itself, as I think it's kind of boring. (I like vocals!) But this has enough movement to it that it's enjoyable as-is. Kind of a playful vibe at times too.

I think I've said this before about one of your instrumentals, but I can picture this as the soundtrack to a short silent film or cartoon.

Nice to know you liked it despite it not being your type. I have an idea for a song with vocals but I still have quite a bit to work on. I've been trying to include vocals for a long time, it's quite hard for me haha I'm not good at it.

I think it's the same one that you mentioned about cartoons because it's my 2nd try on it

Nice work -  to me this is raw Jazz.
It sounds complete, I'd just simply practice as much as you can, as it's a difficult piece to play on time and strike the strings evenly.

Oh and if you can get a stereo pair of mics.

Great work

Ya I've been practicing, thanks for the comments

I'll get the mics one day...... one day.......