#1November 26th, 2011 · 11:04 AM
15 threads / 14 songs
91 posts
The Last Reunion (2nd try)

This song is not in a battle

Hi,  I was very happy to have critisisms about the unconsistent tempo of the 1st version so here's my 2nd attempt

Also added some simple bass movements and 2 minor phrase changes

Always happy to have suggestions to improve

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#2November 27th, 2011 · 01:02 PM
32 threads / 28 songs
201 posts
United States of America
Normally don't listen to guitar by itself, as I think it's kind of boring. (I like vocals!) But this has enough movement to it that it's enjoyable as-is. Kind of a playful vibe at times too.

I think I've said this before about one of your instrumentals, but I can picture this as the soundtrack to a short silent film or cartoon.
#3November 28th, 2011 · 09:04 AM
15 threads / 14 songs
91 posts
Nice to know you liked it despite it not being your type. I have an idea for a song with vocals but I still have quite a bit to work on. I've been trying to include vocals for a long time, it's quite hard for me haha I'm not good at it.

I think it's the same one that you mentioned about cartoons because it's my 2nd try on it
#4December 3rd, 2011 · 12:19 PM
371 threads / 187 songs
3,384 posts
United Kingdom
Nice work -  to me this is raw Jazz.
It sounds complete, I'd just simply practice as much as you can, as it's a difficult piece to play on time and strike the strings evenly.

Oh and if you can get a stereo pair of mics.

Great work
#5December 3rd, 2011 · 01:27 PM
15 threads / 14 songs
91 posts
Ya I've been practicing, thanks for the comments

I'll get the mics one day...... one day.......
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