#1November 13th, 2011 · 04:07 PM
90 threads / 73 songs
263 posts
United Kingdom
With Or Without You (demo
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This song is not in a battle


Auditioning for a band soon.. I've had to write the vocal part for the audition. They gave me this instrumental track for this song and I've composed and recorded the vocals. Just a rough recording.. let me know what you think!


Lyrics:

I'm sick of hiding
My emotions when I know
They should be obvious to you

I'm sick of feeling
Like I'm messed about and played around
There's nothing I can do


I guess I thought that you were something
That you couldn't be
I'm full of fears that we're going nowhere
And I can't control this

We try to justify the reasons why
You're with or without me


And people change their notions
I can't be tied down to you
There's nothing you can say to me
There's nothing you can do

And people change their feelings
I was blind but now I see
A little girl who'll never change
With or without me


You're intentions are clear
I've nothing to fear
Now I've moved on and I don't need you
Or anybody else

I found out the hard way
That you're just not the girl you seem
Found out the hard way
That you're just not the girl I need

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#2November 13th, 2011 · 10:30 PM
181 threads / 54 songs
1,930 posts
Canada
Man I've missed this site. I should really be on here more often.

I really like your lyrics man. At first I thought this was like a full band recording that you were in but then I read what you said and I was like "oh" and began revising what I wrote. lol

I really like these lyrics as I said, i'm sure the band will like them. Are you auditioning to be their singer? I really like the qualities in your voice. I think you'll be in a shoo in. Total garage band rock style. Love it!!
#3November 14th, 2011 · 10:46 AM
90 threads / 73 songs
263 posts
United Kingdom
Thanks man! Yeah, auditioning to be their singer / lyric composer!

Hopefully it will go well, on my way there now, so will let you know what happens!

And yes, I need to use this site more too really! I feel guilty just coming on here to post songs! When I get some free time I'm gonna have a good listen and write some reviews!

And I've just noticed the song title - it should be "With Or Without Me". I can see why I typed it wrong though :p
#4November 14th, 2011 · 10:51 AM
181 threads / 54 songs
1,930 posts
Canada
Petermoncrieff wrote…
Thanks man! Yeah, auditioning to be their singer / lyric composer!

Hopefully it will go well, on my way there now, so will let you know what happens!

And yes, I need to use this site more too really! I feel guilty just coming on here to post songs! When I get some free time I'm gonna have a good listen and write some reviews!

And I've just noticed the song title - it should be "With Or Without Me". I can see why I typed it wrong though :p
lol lol yeah at first I thought it was a U2 cover...   Let me know how it goes!!
#5November 15th, 2011 · 10:44 AM
90 threads / 73 songs
263 posts
United Kingdom
TheKunadiun wrote…
lol lol yeah at first I thought it was a U2 cover...   Let me know how it goes!!

haha!

They liked the song, had to play another song acoustically too.. everything went really well! It's looking likely that I'm gonna be in at the moment, but they have a few more auditions to do so we'll see how it goes!
#6November 18th, 2011 · 07:38 PM
7 threads / 6 songs
20 posts
United States of America
u2 aha
#7November 22nd, 2011 · 08:59 AM
77 threads / 45 songs
2,296 posts
United States of America
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Petermoncrieff...This is good. I like it...You have a voice that reminds me of the old school sound for some reason...Pretty good recording from what I can tell...love the break from drums back to music....Good job..

Nice rating
#8December 5th, 2011 · 05:28 PM
90 threads / 73 songs
263 posts
United Kingdom
Thanks Flyer!

Always nice to get a review from you

Just to let you all know.. I GOT IN THE BAND!

We've recorded a finished version of this song now and we just finished recording our second song tonight! I'll be posting up some brand new songs for you guys very shortly!

Thanks again for all the reviews, they are MUCH appreciated!
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