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wow
very simple yet effective
the louder drum part feels a little more energetic than i would expect out of the song. maybe it's just because the tempo on the drums is working overtime compared to the rest. maybe a rolling-symbal would be nice? i'm not a proficient drummer, so i don't know very well. just a thought
i likes this song! as i said onyour other song just the other day, if i had time to keep making the game i was programming, i'd SOO be all over this to try to use for the music in it.
lovely.
very simple yet effective
the louder drum part feels a little more energetic than i would expect out of the song. maybe it's just because the tempo on the drums is working overtime compared to the rest. maybe a rolling-symbal would be nice? i'm not a proficient drummer, so i don't know very well. just a thought
i likes this song! as i said onyour other song just the other day, if i had time to keep making the game i was programming, i'd SOO be all over this to try to use for the music in it.
lovely.
oh yeah |
what's that title mean?
it's like Final Fantasy VII again! cannon in D as played by the FF7 crew! lol... sweet... nice
i would have like to see the drums come in sooner and play for much more of the song, the part is too short IMHO... that's just the candy in my ear speaking.
i agree that the middle drum part, the fast one, is just a touch out of place by itself... it needs a giant orchestral swell... and some bass... then it'll fit nicely... just by itself it doesn't "do much" for me... that doesn't detract fro my rating though, just so you know. orchestral swell... meh wahtever, use whatever you wanna use but add something to mirror those drums otherwise they feel... well i don't know... they don't fit with the chill factor of the rest of the song... i really hear like a full string section playing the chords during that drum part and a bass... tympani and crash would be good too... as well as TLS's idea of rolling cymbals... like some mallets on a crash-ride would be perfect.
again, none of this really detracts from my rating of the song... it's just the candy in my ear good job so far... work it a little more
i would have like to see the drums come in sooner and play for much more of the song, the part is too short IMHO... that's just the candy in my ear speaking.
i agree that the middle drum part, the fast one, is just a touch out of place by itself... it needs a giant orchestral swell... and some bass... then it'll fit nicely... just by itself it doesn't "do much" for me... that doesn't detract fro my rating though, just so you know. orchestral swell... meh wahtever, use whatever you wanna use but add something to mirror those drums otherwise they feel... well i don't know... they don't fit with the chill factor of the rest of the song... i really hear like a full string section playing the chords during that drum part and a bass... tympani and crash would be good too... as well as TLS's idea of rolling cymbals... like some mallets on a crash-ride would be perfect.
again, none of this really detracts from my rating of the song... it's just the candy in my ear good job so far... work it a little more
thank you |
thank you very much for the excellent criticism.
the title is icelandic for "Good Night". it's a not-so-subtle nod to Sigur Ros, who are definetly one of the most influential bands in my life.
the title is icelandic for "Good Night". it's a not-so-subtle nod to Sigur Ros, who are definetly one of the most influential bands in my life.
this song is good, but not your best. i like the cello part. very sigur ros-ish. nice work.
Really nice song to listen to. I have to agree with dave that this would go down perfectly after a night of partyign as the sun starts to come up and everyone is slowly collapsing. I don't know what entheon was doing when he wrote his suggestions but he more or less summed up everythign I would suggest to change so this is gonna be a short post. Good stuff all the same.
i'd say the only citicism i have of this piece of music is that you need to put more rosin on your bow (lol jk SIK) nice synths
if a bass line came in with those sweet crazy drums and then left with it, that's be sweet, but i mean, i'm only lookin out for this guy here.... wait a minute... that's a pretty catchy line... jamison?
if a bass line came in with those sweet crazy drums and then left with it, that's be sweet, but i mean, i'm only lookin out for this guy here.... wait a minute... that's a pretty catchy line... jamison?
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coade wrote…
Once DaveUK mentioned this would make an excellent after party soundtrack, I can't get the image out of my head, walking home in the snow, becoming sober, but not quite yet, the moment when it all makes sense. This song is great.
heh yeah, I stumbled on thetremulance account and figured "hey this dude made some pretty OK stuff, let's check something out I haven't listened to" - so that's how I got here. And listening to this, the quoted comment kinda sum it all up for me.
Really relaxing song, great for this drizzlin sunday morning. I've got nothing to do but rehearse some of my own stuff... later today.
Great track! the bowed instruments are a bit too midi though, but it works. Well done!
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