#1October 30th, 2011 · 12:46 AM
32 threads / 28 songs
201 posts
United States of America
Here
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This song is not in a battle


Lyrics & music by Brian Vaughn.

I could be the last one that you had.
My mind is without conflict in only this.
Will you think about these things when you lay in bed at night and fight for rest?
Will you think about these things with my message on your telephone?

Oh..
Brace yourself for this.
It feels like nothing else could matter.
The outside world could disappear.
I'm so blinded by these feelings.
I just wish that you..

Would hear me out.
Nothing's going to go away.
Ever since I met you, we haven't been apart so long that I could turn this off.
Will you tell me not to think, when all I think about pertains to you?
Will you show me how to feel when my stomach twists and turns at the thought of seeing you?

Oh..
Brace yourself for this.
It feels like nothing else could matter.
The outside world could disappear.
I'm so blinded by these feelings.
I just wish that you were here.

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#2October 30th, 2011 · 09:54 AM
340 threads / 59 songs
4,344 posts
United Kingdom
Aha the song man strikes again !
As a hand-made studio production it's exceptionally good quality all round.
This turns out to be very dynamic and exciting, it seems to be a build up to the last minute.
I do think 'pertains to you' makes it sound a bit too intelligent when something like "when all I think is all about you" would be more 'sing along' and down to earth, because the rest is.
Still think it's top class stuff.
#3October 30th, 2011 · 11:05 AM
32 threads / 28 songs
201 posts
United States of America
Ooh but I like the word "pertain" ! 

In all seriousness, thanks so much for the encouraging words Kings. Glad this one's got enough dynamics for you. I actually put a fair amount of effort into not squashing them out with compression.
#4October 30th, 2011 · 12:10 PM
188 threads / 27 songs
2,825 posts
Germany
This is a good production
and a good composition
and a good performance


Guess you make it with this song. Very stylish.
#5November 25th, 2011 · 03:36 PM
26 threads / 26 songs
80 posts
United Kingdom
This is a well put together song.
Good production.
WillyBob
#6November 28th, 2011 · 02:52 PM
118 threads / 55 songs
3,086 posts
Netherlands
nice stuff, well constructed.

the lyrical content isn't really my thing though, too "soft sided" in a way, but it does work as they are about feelings/situations many people recognize.
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