#1October 13th, 2011 · 06:51 PM
32 threads / 28 songs
201 posts
United States of America
Love (Work in Progress)
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This song is not in a battle


Edit: Updates will be posted here (since BandAmp doesn't let you over-write a file):
http://soundcloud.com/brianvaughn/love-work-in-progress

New song idea I'm working on. Began as a light-hearted acoustic tune but is now turning into... this.

Feedback is very welcome.

Lyrics (so far) for those who like 'em:

Love, love, love...

Look up and down.
There are shapes in the clouds,
And ants on the ground who march in line,
To the roots of a tree,
Whose bark carries the name,
Of a girl whose boy thought her worth the mark.

Oh what it must feel like to have your surface scarred,
And for something so inconsequential as love.

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#2October 13th, 2011 · 09:28 PM
128 threads / 44 songs
2,814 posts
Puerto Rico
Sounding pretty awesome so far...!!!!!
#3October 14th, 2011 · 08:42 AM
32 threads / 28 songs
201 posts
United States of America
Thanks Mar.
#4October 14th, 2011 · 04:34 PM
171 threads / 24 songs
2,327 posts
United Kingdom
re: Love (Work in Progress)
brianvaughn wrote…
Edit: Updates will be posted here (since BandAmp doesn't let you over-write a file):
http://soundcloud.com/brianvaughn/love-work-in-progress

New song idea I'm working on. Began as a light-hearted acoustic tune but is now turning into... this.

Feedback is very welcome.

Lyrics (so far) for those who like 'em:

Love, love, love...

Look up and down.
There are shapes in the clouds,
And ants on the ground who march in line,
To the roots of a tree,
Whose bark carries the name,
Of a girl whose boy thought her worth the mark.

Oh what it must feel like to have your surface scarred,
And for something so inconsequential as love.

I just think u have the best voice man!!!!

it gets a bit swamped in this mix
by busy guitar
work it out!!! haha
its a mix thing...haha

jeez get a manager!!!
happy fish

of course it just be my taste
#5October 14th, 2011 · 04:37 PM
32 threads / 28 songs
201 posts
United States of America
Thanks fishy.

This is still just an early mix. I'll get things (including vocal levels) balanced out more as it goes.

I don't know who would want to be my manager. I bet I'd be a pain in the ass.. lol
#6October 14th, 2011 · 04:38 PM
171 threads / 24 songs
2,327 posts
United Kingdom
brianvaughn wrote…
Thanks fishy.

This is still just an early mix. I'll get things (including vocal levels) balanced out more as it goes.

I don't know who would want to be my manager. I bet I'd be a pain in the ass.. lol

its lovely so far

sounds daft

but could i mix it for you...

its an internrt collab thing??
#7October 14th, 2011 · 04:50 PM
32 threads / 28 songs
201 posts
United States of America
Sure Fish. I'd be happy to DropBox you the stems once I'm done recording if you'd like to take a shot at mixing and/or remixing it.
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