Hello everybody, i come back, with this new pop rock project, i hope enjoy my new band and i hope you like it

The lyrics

Wondering what you’re doing tomorrow
I’d like to admit, I wanna meet you a bit

If it’s okay, I’ll pick you up from your cloud
we’ll taste a thousand cafes, you bring your fire, cos I’ll feed the flame

Sunshine has come to play
Dream a dream today

Draw me a tree to live and sing for the walrus
Draw me a tree to breathe and sing for the sorrows
No matter where I go in my mind you live so…

Wondering what universe are you from
Cos I’d like to admit, stars shine brighter when you’re here

If it’s okay I’ll pick you up from your cloud
to light the wise and they grey

You bring your flowers, cos I’ll bring the rain
Sunshine has come to play

Dream a dream today
Draw me a tree to live and sing for the walrus
Draw me a tree to breathe and sing for the sorrows
No matter where I go in my mind you live so…
No matther where I go in my mind you live so…
No matther where I go in my mind you live so…

Great song / composition. Well thought out. Well sung.
But I think you can improve the ( instrumental-) mix by adding some low freqs. It´s too trebly in my ears.
Sort of "flat". Drums don´t cut through, too less energy, no bassdrum . Can´t hear the bass ?!?
Panning is good.

This song is very good and has deserved a rework on the mix, imo.
Keep it up.......

U.L.I.

thanks for the comments, and yes we need mix again the song, i hope fix soon the mix.

nice job! halfway loosing attention a bit, love how you break it up near the end.
remix as stated,  maybe add some backing vox for the verses?(just a thought after the first listening)

This is great. Good recording quality. Catchy song. Strong vocals.

No suggestions to add to ULI's other than... could always use more layered vocals? (I'm a sucker for those.)

Big thumbs up otherwise.

hello evrybdy   i have problm to recrd my live audio bcos wen i start singing my own voice listening me    plz help meee..

Try starting your own thread in the Recording forum as you seem to have a recording problem

GREAT SONG !!!!!

TOPPY ..... HI FREQs ...

EQ SCREWED AT THE HIGH END

Losing 80% of the band sound!!!

Ive mentioned this before

Tinny Fish

thanks for the comment, and yes i need fix the mix