Rough recording of a song I wrote yesterday. Thinking of performing it Wednesday, what do you think?


Lyrics


And I saw you standing there with that look upon your face
Knowing hope had been erased
Now I'm gone without a trace

Please don't think that I don't care
Or the thought of you has never crossed
My mind


And it seems
You can't fight
What's between your eyes


So open your eyes
And I'll open my heart
I'll tell you a lie
If that's what you like

And all these memories fading
Like colours breaking now
I'm aching for you
So open your eyes


Sure I'm full of fears
My memory is fading but I'm sure
That I'm worth more than this

Finding out the hard way
That you're just not the girl I thought
That you could be


And it seems
You can't fight
What's between your eyes


So open your eyes
And I'll open my heart
I'll tell you a lie
If that's what you like

And all these memories fading
Like colours breaking now
I'm aching for you
So open your eyes


I've waited long enough to see if this would change
I've waited long enough but here it goes again


So open your eyes
And I'll open my heart
I'll tell you a lie
If that's what you like

And all these memories fading
Like colours breaking now
I'm aching for you
So open your eyes


So open your eyes
And I'll open my heart
I'll tell you a lie
If that's what you like

And all these memories fading
Like colours breaking now
I'm aching for you
So open your eyes

I really like your voice. It reminds me a lot of a vocalist I've listened to before but I can't.. remember.. who! If I do I'll update this comment.

And the song is very pretty also. I'd enjoy hearing a polished recording of this song if you get around to posting one.