Song I wrote about a girl I worked with.  Thought I'd share.

sounds like a psyched up Dylan classic 

actually your sound reminds me of Pere Ubu. I like things all weird and psychedelic like, makes me feel not so alone.

Oh well, I hope she liked it. cheers

Nice free and easy feel, would have liked the vox louder in the mix.

People!

This is pretty good work... sometimes I bang on about emotion and feeling - the vocals could be made more interesting to give it more feeling - I think it's an issue overlooked, as listeners need to somehow "connect" to the music, and if you're not feeling it, then they may not get it..
A few timing issues, and a bit of remixing needed (especially the lead vocals)
You have that Marc Bolan warble going on there!!!
An interesting listen.