| Life Ain`t Easy |    |
I wrote this after going to visit my daughter in Daytona Beach.I had never seen a homeless person until then,it made me think how anyone could end up in that situation
Nice composition - tidy performance
Would like to have heard your vox more expressive - in other words exaggerate certain words or play around with dynamics, perhaps work a little on your breathing. It's hard for any vocal to sit with just an acoustic guitar, there's nowhere to hide, especially singing it with little effects like you have.
Would like to have heard your vox more expressive - in other words exaggerate certain words or play around with dynamics, perhaps work a little on your breathing. It's hard for any vocal to sit with just an acoustic guitar, there's nowhere to hide, especially singing it with little effects like you have.
| re: Life Ain`t Easy |
mark47 wrote…
I wrote this after going to visit my daughter in Daytona Beach.I had never seen a homeless person until then,it made me think how anyone could end up in that situation
SONGWRITING.......
I Love it
This a good Honest Expression of Your thoughts
nice playing .recording.. performance
must admit surprised youd never seen a homeless person before
your song made me look for some USA stats
and i found some here
http://www.thechicagoalliance.org/homelessstats.aspx
so your song did the job
I stopped and thought of others
And I dont believe in hell .........
But thats something completely different!! haha
So yep listened hard to your song
Job done .
Scary stats though
Fish
I see what you`re sayign.Thank you 
MaxdB wrote…
sounds like you know what you are doing very well, just came to mind that you give a lot of emphasis on every 1st count with vox, dont know if thats wanted.., maybe more fluent will work better?
great stuff though!
I know what you mean, I hate recording vocals 
I think I do better live it is harder to get into it when I`m singing alone for some reason .
I think I do better live it is harder to get into it when I`m singing alone for some reason .Denis wrote…
Nice composition - tidy performance
Would like to have heard your vox more expressive - in other words exaggerate certain words or play around with dynamics, perhaps work a little on your breathing. It's hard for any vocal to sit with just an acoustic guitar, there's nowhere to hide, especially singing it with little effects like you have.
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Thank you, I come from a really small town in central NY where you never see homeless people.I moved to a bigger area now,but I still don`t see many homeless people.Florida is full of homeless people.Probably because it is a lot warmer there,here in NY it gets real cold in the winter,the people that are homeless here go through hell in the winter months.It is a sad thing.Thanks for the link
swordfish wrote…
mark47 wrote…
I wrote this after going to visit my daughter in Daytona Beach.I had never seen a homeless person until then,it made me think how anyone could end up in that situation
SONGWRITING.......
I Love it
This a good Honest Expression of Your thoughts
nice playing .recording.. performance
must admit surprised youd never seen a homeless person before
your song made me look for some USA stats
and i found some here
http://www.thechicagoalliance.org/homelessstats.aspx
so your song did the job
I stopped and thought of others
And I dont believe in hell .........
But thats something completely different!! haha
So yep listened hard to your song
Job done .
Scary stats though
Fish
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