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Ann would have been distracted ....

I started off thinking a clearer recording would do this .... then I wondered where the vocal was.
It becomes a bit long without a vocal or solo to liven it up, nice as it is.

I like what I think you're trying to do, but I'm afraid it doesn't quite come together for me.

There seemed to be some slight but noticeable problems with both the tuning and the timing at the start. Both have to be spot-on for this sort of sparse intro. The track picks up nicely once you get the groove going, the bass is minimal but solid, and the balance is good.

The second half seems to offer nothing new to complete the track, which was already fairly repetitive. If you can rework it to provide a bit more development and a convincing ending, then it has potential.

Good luck - I hope the comments help.

i really like the song in buts and parts..
i agree with kings..
it becomes a bit long without vocals..

but i really like the music arrangement..

better recording would be awesome..

keep the good work going..

cheers..