#1April 2nd, 2011 · 10:17 PM
15 threads / 15 songs
48 posts
Sweden
I Still See You
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This song is not in a battle


Hey guys, my latest work. I've worked with frequenzes for the first time in my life and I found it pretty.... interesting.. I think it sounds good I guess, but I'd love to hear your thoughts.

cheers

please change your mind
please come back to me
I don't wanna live
if you're not here

you are everything
that I need
and I am everything
that you once needed

I don't know where you are
and I shouldn't search for you
but I'd do anything
to have you back again

I can not sleep
'cause you're in front of me
oh don't erase me
please remember me 


but I wish that I could save you
I want to be with you

I wish I had a heart
that wasn't so wounded


Sometimes I'm low
when you are high
sometimes I see you dancing
in my sleepless nights

I see you all the time
and I hate mirrors
sometimes I think I see your
arms around my chest

but you're never there
when I turn around

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#2April 10th, 2011 · 03:05 AM
3 threads / 1 songs
18 posts
United States of America
Nice
I can feel the pain in this song.  Well done.  Your voice works well, I like the beginning and the build. Only thing I would change is to push the strings back a bit at the end, maybe add a bit more piano or lead at the end too.

I really enjoyed your song and recording.

mat
#3April 10th, 2011 · 07:20 AM
341 threads / 59 songs
4,361 posts
Cymru (Wales)
A hart felt performance ... yes the pain is tangible.
Not really into moody songs but it's good never the less.
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