Song I wrote about Autumn,has a progressive rock feel to it

vox are very 'dry', and also very on top(especially the first parts), why did you choose for that? its bit too less/much for me
harmonie is nice though!
would love to hear them a bit more drownded into the music and space..
otherwise i like the song much, sort of ballad or small epic 
nice work again
 

Agree to Max about the vox .
But composition & arrangement are fine .
I like much the e-git parts and soloing .
good song 
U . L . I .

Hi Max, a friend of mine did all the recording and production,all I did was played guitar and sand,he did all the recording and mastering etc.

Hi ULI  thank you  

great song love the acustic tones

Hi Steve,thank you.

The balanced guitars at the start work well, but I think the right-hand track needs a a slightly more interesting strum pattern.

I found the lead guitar intrusive in the verses. It works very well during the instrumental breaks, so just leave it there.

I'd have to agree about the vocals. They don't need much, maybe just a touch of space and possibly a fraction lower in the mix on verse 1. (If you keep the lead guitar in the later verses then you need a bit more on the vox there, because some of the lyrics are getting a little lost.)

Good song - I hope you found this helpful.