rough mix just putting it out to see what you think

Not my genre, so will not critque the music, but I would work on the mix, the guitars are overpowering everything.

Suggestionns start mix with just bass and Drums, then lead guitar and finaly vox, The vox should then shine through 

yeah for sure. it was just mixed in about 5 min just to get it down working on a finale mix. probably doing the guitars and bass over.

Hey, nice work!
Denis is right... the guitars are killing your voice. It's a powerful voice, though, but sounds kind of "naked" there. I'm sure when you remix it you will get it perfect.