#1February 15th, 2011 · 10:59 PM
57 threads / 43 songs
148 posts
United States of America
Im Back
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This song is not in a battle


Just finish this one hope u like it

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#2February 17th, 2011 · 02:16 PM
371 threads / 187 songs
3,380 posts
United Kingdom
Sort of spooky feel to it, someone going through despair, no way out, phew!!
Drums sound a bit flat.
Could be tighter in places
Ineresting where your gonna take it
#3February 18th, 2011 · 03:33 PM
340 threads / 59 songs
4,344 posts
United Kingdom
Cool beat.... would be good with the right vocal track.
The dis-harmonies do make it sound spooky and closed in around...... it needs a breaking free bit......but I suppose that will also come in it's own time.
Keep on beating that drum cp, your getting better every time.....this one is a good solid rhythm and for all it's desperation it still does all the right things!  
#4February 20th, 2011 · 01:30 AM
4 threads / 3 songs
89 posts
Argentina
It's true about this spooky effect... uhm...
I like the ambience of it... Still, I just get comfortable with the harmony and timings sometimes when they go out of the basic coherence. I would say this effect is interesting.... I still need to listen to it a little more, as it's not the type of music I normally listen to.
#5February 21st, 2011 · 12:56 PM
128 threads / 44 songs
2,814 posts
Puerto Rico
Good one CP..see you working those beats amigo...Yes it has a sort suspense feel to it! Keep at it its coming together rather nicely!
#6February 21st, 2011 · 04:45 PM
118 threads / 55 songs
3,081 posts
Netherlands
Those are some odd dis-harmonies there, quite disconcerting. Mind, I'm listening while gaming, and it doesnt please my ears much With just the piano in the end, it's pretty good tho. Maybe the string sound is a bit too dominant too, especially if the intention is to make it sound gloomy. Strings make things sound daylight bright. Hmmmmmmm well otherwise it's a nice track.
#7February 21st, 2011 · 07:31 PM
57 threads / 43 songs
148 posts
United States of America
Marino wrote…
Good one CP..see you working those beats amigo...Yes it has a sort suspense feel to it! Keep at it its coming together rather nicely!

Marino!! i want to do a calabo with u on "im back".  i would love to have a nice mello elec guitar threw out the whole song, but a hard gore almost f u guitar in the refrian and outtro..
#8February 21st, 2011 · 08:18 PM
163 threads / 18 songs
2,320 posts
United Kingdom
re: Im Back
cpbeats wrote…
Just finish this one hope u like it

I Like...  to a point.......
very film music style
you clearly introduce a concept in music called ''tension''
u use boat loads of it here!!!
its the idea that the western trained musician/ear always expects or
wants to resolve to what it hears as the 'harmony it expects'

the clash of notes u use will throw most listeners


ive listened to it 10 times or more

cool but very un-nerving
If that your intention then great!!

lookin behind me fish

OR it can just sound ''out of tune''or disjointed
#9February 22nd, 2011 · 12:23 PM
57 threads / 43 songs
148 posts
United States of America
re: re: Im Back
swordfish wrote…
cpbeats wrote…
Just finish this one hope u like it

I Like...  to a point.......
very film music style
you clearly introduce a concept in music called ''tension''
u use boat loads of it here!!!
its the idea that the western trained musician/ear always expects or
wants to resolve to what it hears as the 'harmony it expects'

the clash of notes u use will throw most listeners


ive listened to it 10 times or more

cool but very un-nerving
If that your intention then great!!

lookin behind me fish

OR it can just sound ''out of tune''or disjointed

what do you think i shuld do i like any suggestions you or anybody ealse may have.
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