"You want the house, the home, the white picket fence,
Said that I could stay home, you’d pay the rent,
But I knew, yeah I knew, it wasn’t what I wanted to do.
You want 2.5 kids and all that jazz,
A lifetime commitment for good and for bad
But I’m through, I’m through, hey baby I’m through with you yeah!"

Sounds like you all had fun.
Would like to hear your vox cut through better, sounds like slightly too much low end and not quite enough top.
Might help if you panned the instruments wider, the drums sound mono?
Good performance by all.
Good work. 

Very good tempered song. Nice arrangement & instrumentation.
I´m with denis due to the mix . Would suggest to (re)work on every single track / instrument with EQ and brightening up them a bit . Perhaps some dynamic adjustments on the tracks can help , too .
If you work also on the stereo sum it will sound really , really good , I guess .

U.L.I.

I like the acoustic guitar call and response... It's just too loud.
All the other production issues have been discussed ^^

Great song though, heaps of fun. Loving all the little solos 

Wow! Great singer!

Nice crisp production and very original. There's a helluva lot going on in this song, between the flute, the guitars  and the snappy drums and horns. Sweet breaks. This was fun to listen to.
There you go.

Ha the vocals are very fun!