take a listen

nice trak

Well Done
very good production
except snare sound hits me in the face on my setup

yep the voice too far back
just a bit

post lyrics please

its a pet of mine...........

slightly deaf - fish

I liked this right from the start musically - totally love the vibe of it.  Couldn't really tell what the vocalist was saying a lot of the time which would have been nice.  I like the harmony vocals too.

Vocals could be mixed a little better at times - like maybe compressed a little or something? 

Dig the song.

Brian

damn I just sing it.. well here i go's :
She's a image of of perfectionallty, created by needs and Ideals.
in a way she carries individualty, and her name is what you choose
she has her home in sillicon valley, unknown perrents ,but her last name could be Gates
 she keeps her close in a directory, speaking words from files, her favourit fruit is an apple
and her favourit pets are mice
And I beleave in her I dear close my eyes with her, do what she tells me to do
and when I turn her on, I can feel she is the one ., really cyberlove.
I was searching for my favourite MP3's when she poped up starting talking to me.
I tried to shut her out without eny luck, cauz then she changed her look and I was caught
cauz she seems to know everything of what I am searching for, she makes me feel o' o' so happy
and she is'nt pay per wew... and I beleave in her, I dear close my eyes with her do what she tells me to do
and when I tutn her on I can feel she is the one my cyberlove my cyberlove ....

i dont feel a need for tecnical review here, just had a nice listening, didnt went crazy i admit,  but hearing the effort and musicianship. Nice harmonies
can i just say i like it?

Nicely played... I like the song.
The mix could do with a bit of work - vocals higher and crisper, EQ on the drums sorted etc, etc. 
But overall it's still a good bit of work.