#1January 23rd, 2011 · 12:05 AM
5 threads / 5 songs
15 posts
United States of America
Where the Wind Begins
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This song is not in a battle


This is my "instrumental with lyrics."  I had the music done and decided it needed a few lyrics, so I wrote them in a stream-of-consciousness sort of way.  Good luck at figuring out what this song's about.  I know the piano is a little repetitive, but I added a few extra sounds here and there to break it up a bit.  Anyway, enjoy...


You fell from a dream without a warning
A new memory found in the morning
Embracing a tree, a wooden mourning

Apart and aghast, slept in the desert
We touched in the past beyond the desert life

We will never forget clouds on the horizon
Borne of yesterday's wrong guesses
Everybody's eyes closed
Busy disguising and hiding the narrow road
Harbingers of pine to weather out the doubt
To whither with the doubters' last laughs
I've carried your thoughts over my shoulder
The winters call us home

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#2January 23rd, 2011 · 07:39 AM
128 threads / 44 songs
2,814 posts
Puerto Rico
Cool harms..Yeah piano does get a bit repetitive but it works.Not crazy about the drums although they also seem to work.Voice does get buried a little at times..Good one!
#3January 23rd, 2011 · 02:01 PM
176 threads / 26 songs
2,342 posts
United Kingdom
I like it as a work in progress
the skeleton is ther to build up the production ....

reverbs ........ fades panning etc .................

great ......... welcome to the amp.......

excellent quality recording

I LIKE THIS A LOT

happy-fish  ker plonk!!
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