| We Pass Unseen |    |
This song was inspired by a paragraph in the book Zen and the Art of Motorcycle Maintenance. Basically I felt amazed at how we all pass through each others lives both actively and passively and how even seemingly insignificant events can influence our lives. So the components are simple, much like the scene that the lyrics illustrate. Also, I love calling attention to scenarios that we usually conduct on "auto pilot" because if you look you can find inspiration anywhere. Let me know what you think :-)
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This is an impressing debut.. Very atmospheric & relaxing . Chord changes are really interresting and well chosen.. Ya git play is error-free , too.
There two small points to criticize:
1. For my personal taste I would add some higher freqs on the git and vox to give more transparency and clarity to the mix . Maybe I can understand the lyrics better. (can you write the lyrics here ?)
Autotune is a nice effect (SOMETIMES) but it makes it difficult to understand lyrics.
2. The background noises (train , "feeping".....) are distracting a bit cuz it happens through the whole song .
Fazit: this makes a relaxed feeling to me . Good composition
U . L . I .
This is an impressing debut.. Very atmospheric & relaxing . Chord changes are really interresting and well chosen.. Ya git play is error-free , too.
There two small points to criticize:
1. For my personal taste I would add some higher freqs on the git and vox to give more transparency and clarity to the mix . Maybe I can understand the lyrics better. (can you write the lyrics here ?)
Autotune is a nice effect (SOMETIMES) but it makes it difficult to understand lyrics.
2. The background noises (train , "feeping".....) are distracting a bit cuz it happens through the whole song .
Fazit: this makes a relaxed feeling to me . Good composition
U . L . I .
My goal with this one was to call attention to the guitar because I thought it had a nice circular piece. The noises in the background are some sort of effect on a tamborine. What you called the autotune is actually a reverb effect though I do see what you mean. Perhaps some high female harmony might also add some higher freq? I think it would be cool to add a second guitar to put some higher freq. to balance the low, thanks for the comment! Here are the lyrics:
Standing in a line of ten
Waiting to buy some bread
The cashier seems upset
The customer seems upset
But I remain the same
Don't lose yourself
In the life you live
We pass unseen
We pass unseen
We pass
And I am merely passing by
And I am merely passing by
Standing in a line of ten
Waiting to buy some bread
The cashier seems upset
The customer seems upset
But I remain the same
Don't lose yourself
In the life you live
We pass unseen
We pass unseen
We pass
And I am merely passing by
And I am merely passing by
HCaulfield wrote…
My goal with this one was to call attention to the guitar because I thought it had a nice circular piece. The noises in the background are some sort of effect on a tamborine. What you called the autotune is actually a reverb effect though I do see what you mean. Perhaps some high female harmony might also add some higher freq? I think it would be cool to add a second guitar to put some higher freq. to balance the low, thanks for the comment! Here are the lyrics:
Standing in a line of ten
Waiting to buy some bread
The cashier seems upset
The customer seems upset
But I remain the same
Don't lose yourself
In the life you live
We pass unseen
We pass unseen
We pass
And I am merely passing by
And I am merely passing by
Must have to do that we are too many people living on too small places . Weīre not able to pay attention on everyone we meet. We would going nuts.
What I said about higher freqs I didnīt mean to add another instrument or a fem vox . ( but might be nice , too) I`ve meant it due to EQing . The git sounds a bit īdamped` to me . But itīs just my personal impression.
Apart from that I like the atmosphere much
U . L . I .
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