I just wanted to upload a song . Plus there's supposed to be vocals on it so its not really done yet. Hope you guys like it anyways.

bit distorted here and there, very loud anyway. repetitive, but with charm. dreamy
I'd love a band there, and a a singer, curious where you'll take this
if u want comment: playing is not too fluent, it deserves a bit more practice on it, its a nice progression, reminds me of something but i don't know what, Góód thing!
( i hear myself saying that to myself so often :p )
better control and some compression might make it perfect then.
but who is perfect? i like it

The distortion was due to bad recording gear, meaning it like adds a ugly fuzz to it when too much it put into it.

I dont think im going to put a band in there, just a singer because I wanted to do this for a open mic at a local place. Thats also why its repetitive because I had like a designated vocalist section for those parts (verse - chorus - verse - chorus - small guitar solo - small bridge to ending chorus - then outro).

Heh yea my playings trash when I recorded it too, I didnt want to take forever makin it perfect because I gotta get the ENTIRE song recorded in one shot lol.

Other than all that I might just play it on pure acoustic. Thanks for reply.

There is some good parts in the song. But it seems very thick or something like overcompressed. It kills the liveliness.