This is like my 3rd song i ever made so give me a break....all good djs had to start somewhere lol

I use fruityloops 5 for my music and im still learning how to use it.

I use fruityloops and it owns. Easy to get into, but difficult to master.

I like this track, I think your use of varied sounds is cool and the production is fairly good. Are you using the mastering plugins that come with FL Studio (eg. Fruity Compressor, an EQ plugin, Soft Clipper, etc) in the mastering section of the mixer.

These will help your mixes by giving you a punchier sound and removing some of those volume peaks. If you aren't sure how to use them, fire up some of the sample songs to see how the testing team do it.

Not so sure on the '8-bit'(?) shot though - was a bit harsh sounding for me.

Other than that, nice work for a beginner - i'm impressed.

PS. Experiment with lead lines using the 'Plucked' generator, or the newer and better 'Sytrus'.

ya i used sytrus...thats what the second syth is....thanks for the review!

pretty good man.  i tried to make some techno/trance songs myself and it didn't work out so great haha.  the thing i didn't like about this is just the kinda gun sounding thing.  it got repetative, that's all.

the ppl talking here and there is cool haha, makes it that much more interesting.

This one is more like it, plenty of mutations to keep the listener on their ears...