My newest song. I'll make an electric version some day, but this is just more convenient at the moment. cheers!

I think , it´s a nice basic track but needs to be worked out . The vox intonation should be improved  , some
´EQing`and dynamics adjustments might make the song working .
I like the "chorus"-effect???? on ya git .It gives "body" to the git.
Keep on working
U . L . I .

You have a nice concept here so go and develop it.
I think it would work better with a ballad beat.

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Yeah nice song, sounds great as an acoustic, just need to polish the vox up in places.
More harmonies would be interesting, perhaps some percussion in the chorus.