This is a reworked version with some decent drums.
Interrested in ya oppinion, folks.
U . L . I .
                
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Sounds Good ULI - It's a keeper.
Would love you to sing a couple of lines 

Tnx Denis,
you know : me and singing...........two colliding worlds 

U.L.I.

Hey...now I'm driving the causeway in new orleans through the swamps on my way to a crawfish boil...oh, guess I'm not driving actually, 'cause I have the sun on my face, barefeet stuck out the open window...oh until 1:48ish, now I'm running and the swamp monster is after me, and the trumpets are coming to save me, thank God...2:32, yeah, I'm almost back to the car with the southern guitar licks, then I'm in space?  Does that mean I'm gonna die?! Ha! Ha!  What an adventure this is!  Whew -- the warm guitars are bringing me back to earth at 3:37 -- yummy -- back on my way again, sun...and what happened!?  Fun!

funkin  jazz rock excellent great textures and arrangement cooking & I love the virtual voyage described by CdeT made for interesting reading.
.IMHO The drums are working yet there are sections & its to do with the sound of this kit's snare ... where dropping it out altogether or stripping back to bare or even supplement with some percussion variation may add  colour. It's near 5 min dur & so plenty of space for it to jump back in with impact .
Thanks for posting
& there can be no denying

You are a genius     
cheers
greg

Wow, it's an evenings entertainment ... it's like 'Jump in, lets go for a drive' and you just keep on driving through neighbourhoods and scenes
Very nice sounds you make there with those highly strung sticks of yours.     

Thank you so much for your imaginative , associative , but also factual reviews CdeT, Yokoinc & Kings. Makes fun to read and is highly appreciated. 

U.L.I.