#1November 6th, 2010 · 03:18 AM
7 threads / 7 songs
28 posts
Sweden
Walk Alone
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[verse1]
When the darkness spreads around
When the ground goes from green to brown
The streets shuts down the sound
And the world brings me down
I walk alone

[verse2]
When the fake smiles seems so real
When the world is like a fantasy
Do I really think that this is me?
I feel like I'm on TV but
I walk alone

[chorus]
I walk alone
Walk alone
I walk alone

[verse3]
Then I wake up on my own
I realize that the dream is gone
This lonely planet that I´m on
Is the place that I call home
I walk alone
I walk alone
Walk alone
I walk alone

[chorus]
I walk alone
Walk alone
I walk alone

[chorus]
I walk alone - I had to wake up on my own
I walk alone - To realize that the dream is gone
Walk alone - This lonely planet that I´m on
I walk alone - Is still the place that I call home
I walk alone
I walk alone
Walk alone
I walk alone

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#2November 6th, 2010 · 04:28 AM
117 threads / 27 songs
1,057 posts
Germany
A pretty good composition , tuggis. Melancholical mood , fitting to the season. ;)Is it the obligatory "scandinavian winter depression" ? (jokin`)  
+: arrangement , git sound , bass sound , clear drums , female vox
- tiny timing issues ,  small shakiness on  male vox , both vox mixed too flat .
Fazit: A very good song needs a bit polishing .
Health & luckiness for ya´ll
U . L . I .
#3November 6th, 2010 · 11:11 AM
102 threads / 59 songs
204 posts
Canada
This is a nice piece. The lyrics are a bit melodramatic for me but they're delivered creatively. The vocals aren't perfectly in tune but they mesh well. The girls on backup give the whole thing a nice dynamic and the song picks up nicely as it progresses. I agree with ULI, it needs some polishing but it's got a good start.
#4November 6th, 2010 · 11:35 AM
371 threads / 187 songs
3,394 posts
United Kingdom
Sounds lovely, just raise the vox a little in the mix, hence they should be slightly more dominant than the backing track, not sure if they are indeed flat as ULI suggested, just too low in the mix.
OK it's not a perfect performance, but it out weighs the feel factor, I think that's far more important.

Nice song
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