This is a new version for Angeleene Sawteeth. Equalized volumes and new mastering tool.
Hope you enjoy!!!

I love the full-bodied electronic sound!  I think the vocals are a bit awkward, but I think that the awkwardness fits with the song.  The sonic vocoder on the vocals at the end is a very nice touch.

Well someone asked me "what the f*ck does this mean?" or, more gently, "What did you want to say with it?"... I believe lyrics are clear (or maybe not)... It's war.

She's got that tattooed arm
and pretty-looking sunglasses
(look at me, look at me, look at me)
reflected in her eyes I feel insane

Driving on her leather carpet
she's the queen of the new age
and I don't need to understand
don't need philosophy to feel better

And then she bites, then she bites, then she bites
listen to the melody of her teeth
Angeleene, Angeleene, Angeleene
what a dirty angel you are!

And everyday in her Ash Wednesday
everyday making a new petrol war
and it's Holy War just to wash her feet
Angeleene, Angeleene

And then she bites, then she bites, then she bites
listen to the melody of her teeth
Angeleene, Angeleene, Angeleene
what a dirty angel you are!

Yes I like the wide sound you have for this. This is a cool electro track s

I cant believe I listened to this whole song.Not into this stuff at all.Musically and creatively I would have to say its pretty good though.Good job.

it's like Talking Heads meets Marilyn Manson meets White Stripes meets NIN... whoa just hit the crazy chorus computer section... ok meets the guys who did "I am blue" lol!

pretty good... can't say it's my aesthetic but pretty good

I love this ; it reminds of the early eighties. Voice could use some ambiance. Nice to see people still doing this kind of stuff!

I love this ; it reminds of the early eighties. Voice could use some ambiance. Nice to see people still doing this kind of stuff!

ooooo, Funky. Kinda Electric Six-ish in parts and more Zancty in others. Well mixed. Not realy my thing though. Vocals could be better.

It's got the perfect music and I think the lyrics are okay but I can sometimes barely understand what your saying and you try too hard with your voice. Mellow it out a little and it'd be great

Intro is too long, i feel the song has no hook either, im not really pulled to listen to it

maybe make it a little faster too.

Vocals needs to be a little clearer.

seems repetitive, not fun to listen to because pace is too slow.

no bridge makes song even more repetitive.

i was waiting for the end.

"hot butter did popcorn much better"

Thank you for the precious advices, though the more I listen this song the more I think that thare's something wrong. In my mind it should have been a sort of silly joke to dance music that is far to be my favourite genre. But I wasn't able to realize that joking atmosphere and it seems so serious to me, actually. Maybe because I'm working very hard on my new demo wich has a very different sound, or maybe not, I really don't know. Have you ever seen "Mulholland Drive" by D.Linch? If yes, you know how I feel when I listen to this creature of mine:)))

This is a good song, the first thing I noticed was that the lyrics are good but I think if you could rhym the words, it would kick some serious butt. Good quality recording and great vocals. I would also have loved to hear a synth solo of some sort somewhere, but by itself, its a great track. Congrats!

I think it's a little too "in your face" as far as levels go. If I were you, I'd turn down some of the sounds to create a little depth and make it more thick subliminally. Where the levels are at now, it's just an impervious wall of sound. Other than that, it's cool.

i really like the rhythm in this song, youve managed to get a real good solid beat through the whole thing without overdoing it which i think it easy in dance music.

Also i dont think it sounds jokey at all. The lyrics sound pretty serious to me, the only criticism i have is that im not too keen on the more electronic beeps and stuff, that may be because im more into rock music stuff i dont know but i think if you made all the beeps and stuff sound more natural then it would sound less jokey.  good job though.